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Raven as hypnotized harem slave

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To prep for an upcoming comic project I've got I'm letting my followers see some of the early designs.  The idea here is that Raven was hypnotized and added to a harem of either a single villain or to that of a cult.  The version for Starfire will be out soon, and she will have a similar outfit.

What I need most is feedback here.  I need to know what people want to see in the comic.  I need to know what people think of Raven's design here.  I need to know what people think of her outfit.

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Let me say right off the bat that I like this picture as a picture of Raven. If I have any issues from a technical standpoint it's her head seems a bit big. But that's a minor quibble in an otherwise attractive picture of the character.

What I'm not to sure about is the design of the outfit...it's just not "harem-ey" enough.

You are, from the title, going for a "hypnotized harem girl" look. But given Raven's normal outfit this looks more like an alternate costume than something she'd have to be brainwashed into wearing. In fact, in many ways it looks a lot like you sort of just reversed her uniform, giving her sleeves and leggings while baring her shoulders and midriff.

More jewelry would help I think, as well as more color.